I would have to disagree with MaestroSorrow there
Dissonance isn't always bad. You need to find a better synthesiser, but I think that the harmonies work well.
It isn't particularly good. Your tambres could use some work, and the harmonies are somewhat unique. The main issue is that you repeat that one line for too long, without changing very much. you could use this as a start for another piece, but it doesn't stand on its own very well.
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